a mermaid has lost my voice-the greedy girl

As said wrote lots of poems over weekend and just tidying a lot up    as usual minimalist and mystically  obscure

this is one of my most peer  praised on the poetry sites i post to  

based on mermaid stories which are based on sodden  mermaid paintings such as above 

 find I do not write conceits or odes  only confusions of existing myths 

 Zennor is a sea port village in Cornwall  famed for its mermaid romance  and commemorative carving of   mermaid in the local church 

as you can see the poem is not romantic 

Zennor morning

I find you a mermaid

Rip her fish

We had not dreamt of mythology 

And of the thoughtless   standing chained in  the quicken deep

A ship burns  on the water

Daybreak  still in incident